The Behind Film - final.

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Script Change

This portion of the script:

(Chloe and jack come over happily)

Chloe

Oh , there you are

(pauses) 

Chloe

Josh what have you done? 

Josh

(pointing to where the figure was)

No it wasn’t me it was some other guy 

Jack

(Accusingly) 

Well,where is he now then huh? 

(Jack and Chloe standing side by side) 

(The figure appears behind them)

(Josh notices)

Josh

Look he’s behind you now

(Both jack and Chloe turn around to see nothing)

Jack

You're insane man 

(Stage direction – shot from figure point of view from the distance)

Chloe

Very

Jack

You expect us to believe that 

Josh

I’d never do this, why would I do this, believe me guys, you know me 

Jack 

Oh I’ve had enough 

(Jack punches josh)

Stage direction – camera switches to perspective of figure watching the scene smiling 

(muffled from distance) 

Chloe 

(Shaking with fear) 

I’ll call the police, watch the bodies 

(Figure walks away from the scene)

(Shot fades to black to signify end of scene)

Has been removed from our opening , we have done this as the current filming of our opening was already around 1:45 , so we couldn't afford to have another whole scene. we also had feedback saying that we had too much dialog in our opening , and seeing as the last scene was mainly dialog we decided to remove it. in its place we will keep the very end of the scene and try and fit it into the end of the current scene.

Character change.

Character change of names - 'Natalie' to Jamal'.

The reason that we have decided to change this is due to the fact that we could not find anyone suitable for the role of Natalie, so therefore we have decided to use another male as well as Josh. The reason for this is that we think it will contrast the friendship between the boys and will show a good use of emotion as it will be easier to show through a real life form of friendship, not put on for thr camera.